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I am in desperate need for some actual feed back and Critique. Please help. My page is Deviouslouis.Deviantart.com
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Deadlylove55406 Nov 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I feel like if you were to draw more abstract stuff it would look much better, But if you really want to continue on the path then I suggest you take an art class or Do more self practice, You have a lot of potential but you definitely need more practice.
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SonyaSpiral Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Check out children drawing books from your local library. (I'm middle-aged and that's what I've been doing off and on for the past year.) They provide excellent advice for shading and other techniques. Then the sketches are not only helpful for practice but fun.
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hmmm.....practice...that's all I can say...mooo!

it worked for me (kinda)
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LWSkybones Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your are is good but with a bit more practice, you can do even better. If you want to practice i recommend taking a look at :iconxxspiritkeeperxx: 's stuff ^^ or you could study human anatomy a bit more, get the proportions right, and your art will be much better :3
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octopops09 Nov 12, 2012
Opps.. huh? Nvm I'm new.. So i don't really understand what every thing is and stuff... Sorry :(
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octopops09 Nov 12, 2012
:) :D
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octopops09 Nov 12, 2012
What art have you seen.. my photos? Well. Thanks for the advice.. Really appreciate it..
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i've seen your art
you just need lots and lots and lots of practices
beside practices, you should check out other people's arts and read/watch cartoons, anime or comic, manga
not just watching normally, try to pause at some scenes that have to do with complicated angles, notice every single part on the design and art
reading comic/ manga slowly not only help you with your details but also understanding the plot
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